I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Today Ds and Lk are writing sentences about what we did for science, to explain what we have been doing with the sentences and combining with the science we did.
The examples:
Very Short Sentence: The biltong tasted very salty.
W-Start: We had to wait 1-2 weeks for the seed to sprout.
Kia ora Chloe Well done completing your three sentences, your short sentence 'The biltong tasted very salty.' is great, it includes only 5 words and is a complete thought. I am really interested to try making biltong, it seems like an interesting process and I've never tasted it! With your other two sentences, the W sentence needs to begin with "where, when, while or whilst", I wonder how you could restructure your sentence about the seeds to include on of these words. Maybe keep checking back to the instructions on the slides your teacher has provided so that you can stay on track. I'm looking forward to seeing your work when school starts back (even if it's online). Keep safe and warm! Whaea Raewyn
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Kia ora Chloe
ReplyDeleteWell done completing your three sentences, your short sentence 'The biltong tasted very salty.' is great, it includes only 5 words and is a complete thought. I am really interested to try making biltong, it seems like an interesting process and I've never tasted it! With your other two sentences, the W sentence needs to begin with "where, when, while or whilst", I wonder how you could restructure your sentence about the seeds to include on of these words. Maybe keep checking back to the instructions on the slides your teacher has provided so that you can stay on track. I'm looking forward to seeing your work when school starts back (even if it's online). Keep safe and warm!
Whaea Raewyn