I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
I like how you've used the full name for the brothers instead of using their first and last names. The next thing you could do is add images to show the brothers or their work.
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Hi Chloe
ReplyDeleteI like how you've used the full name for the brothers instead of using their first and last names.
The next thing you could do is add images to show the brothers or their work.