I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Chloe you made an awesome slide show. This reminded me of my favorite animal arctic fox. Maybe next time slow it down because you could not read the writing. Did you have fun making it ?
Hi my name is Harmony I love your blog post,I like them because they are very creative and awesome well done Chloe. My favorite animal is a fox and the picture that you put of the fox was so cute I loved that picture but I think you need to make it look like the fox is not in the dirt. You did a wonderful job well done Chloe.It even reminded me of when I made a animation about foxes but it went so wrong but I keep on trying and I got it finished. I was proud of myself. Your animation is so cool.
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Wow chloe! That is so cool! How old do foxes grow to?
ReplyDeletewow Chloe! i love how you added you friend marina that was nice of you.
ReplyDeletechloe you did a amazing job the slides a fantastic and its nice of you to let her be in there.
ReplyDeleteHi Chloe you made an awesome slide show. This reminded me of my favorite animal arctic fox. Maybe next time slow it down because you could not read the writing. Did you have fun making it ?
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Harmony I love your blog post,I like them because they are very creative and awesome well done Chloe. My favorite animal is a fox and the picture that you put of the fox was so cute I loved that picture but I think you need to make it look like the fox is not in the dirt. You did a wonderful job well done Chloe.It even reminded me of when I made a animation about foxes but it went so wrong but I keep on trying and I got it finished. I was proud of myself. Your animation is so cool.
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